It was 2035. There was a lab called Grizzly Lab in Washington D.C. The time scientists were working the machines in the night. The clock read 11:30. The owner of this laboratory were working this project. Sparks flew making a great sight.. There was a thing that looked like a big smartphone. the black screen suddenly got brighter and brighter until there was a boom and a tunnel appeared the 4 people highfived. Their names were Chocolate, James, Henry, and Jack. Jack pressed 7000000002035 and pressed past. The hole made a great light. The four people, Chocolate, James, Henry, and Jack went in There was a quick flash of 2013,1811,107,65 B.C, and finally 70000000000000 B.C. They wore their space suit and went out. They were in a crater in a meteoroid There was a another space after all. They looked around the crater, intrigued. "Hey don't you think it's getting hot in here?" Henry said. They looked around and saw a star, a supernova which was purple, about to destroy the whole of the comet. They squeaked like mice and Chocolate pressed any buttons and pressed forward. A tremendous light came out of the hole. They jumped in. Chocolate said" That was a close call. 700 B.C., 300 B.C., 300, 2000,7000,, 70631. They got off. Jack was the first one to open his mouth. An amazing sight appeared in their eyes. It was a great la there were in a lab there were robots everywhere. Monsters were in bottles but found out that they were body parts. It was alive! Then something happened, "Intruders!!!" Robots came. They went backwards. They tied them up with a glowing thing that made everyone scream in pain. There were 4 chairs and sitting there were..."Jack, Chocolate, Henry and James!?"I knew you would come" That was Chocolate!" Choco should we should we free the ropes?" That was James's voice!"Yes we should Jam" That was Jack! "Don't call me Jam , Jackie!" "Well you should have known, we are your future selves" Chocolate opened his mouth first"But how can you live for about like 70000 years?" The future James answered"Well we invented a potion that makes you live for 1000000 years. We drank it when we were 35 didn't we?" They all nodded in agreement. There was a moment silence until there was an alarm "WAAAAAA! meteorite 308jx2halley coming straight for the lab WAAAAAA!" The future selves gave the potion and future James said"Drink the potion!!!"
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You seemed to enjoy reading and writing Sci-fi novels, don't you? :) Reading through your story, I sometimes reminded the movie "Back to the Future" since it also deals with paradox in time traveling. Nice work :). However, I would recommend you to elaborate more on ending 2. If you want to include strength potions in your story, you should explain about it in the body part, such as "The laboratory had myriads (all kinds of) potions, each glimmering and shimmering in different colors and showing off their mystical and magical abilities." Write the explanation on your own. Nice Job :)
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